Start with a clear direction
Play the file on a phone or a small preview, read each title once at normal speed and inspect contrast over changing backgrounds.
Put it into your edit
Open the downloaded MP4 alongside your brief. Watch the whole video, then return to the moment you want to improve. Turn that observation into a specific revision request.
An instruction to make your own
Use this direction for my video: Play the file on a phone or a small preview, read each title once at normal speed and inspect contrast over changing backgrounds. If text is hard to read, shorten the wording, simplify the treatment or request more screen time.
Check the detail that matters
If text is hard to read, shorten the wording, simplify the treatment or request more screen time.
Keep the next change focused
Name the moment, say what should change and describe what you want to keep. For a title, supply the replacement words. For pacing, identify the shot that needs more or less time. Play the surrounding sequence after the revision to hear and see how the change fits.