Start with a clear direction
Check whether the opening identifies the subject and whether essential spoken information has a readable visual equivalent. Add only the text needed to close a real gap.
Put it into your edit
Open the downloaded MP4 alongside your brief. Watch the whole video, then return to the moment you want to improve. Turn that observation into a specific revision request.
An instruction to make your own
Use this direction for my video: Check whether the opening identifies the subject and whether essential spoken information has a readable visual equivalent. Add only the text needed to close a real gap. Silent viewing is one review pass; also listen for speech, music and sound problems.
Check the detail that matters
Silent viewing is one review pass; also listen for speech, music and sound problems.
Keep the next change focused
Name the moment, say what should change and describe what you want to keep. For a title, supply the replacement words. For pacing, identify the shot that needs more or less time. Play the surrounding sequence after the revision to hear and see how the change fits.