Start with a clear direction
Watch the beginning and ending of each action. Keep a take where the hand enters, uses the product and leaves the frame; an attractive fragment may hide how the action works.
Put it into your edit
Upload your clips to Shorty and describe the result you want. Add a reference if it helps show the pace or visual treatment. Play the first cut, then use chat to shape the next version.
An instruction to make your own
Use this direction for my video: Watch the beginning and ending of each action. Keep a take where the hand enters, uses the product and leaves the frame; an attractive fragment may hide how the action works. A sequence should not imply a successful result when the selected take stops before the result is visible.
Check the detail that matters
A sequence should not imply a successful result when the selected take stops before the result is visible.
Keep the next change focused
Name the moment, say what should change and describe what you want to keep. For a title, supply the replacement words. For pacing, identify the shot that needs more or less time. Play the surrounding sequence after the revision to hear and see how the change fits.