Start with a clear direction
List the one visual element that matters in each scene. Keep supporting text away from it and reduce simultaneous motion around the main action.
Put it into your edit
Upload your clips to Shorty and describe the result you want. Add a reference if it helps show the pace or visual treatment. Play the first cut, then use chat to shape the next version.
An instruction to make your own
Use this direction for my video: List the one visual element that matters in each scene. Keep supporting text away from it and reduce simultaneous motion around the main action. Pause several frames. If the viewer cannot immediately find the subject, simplify the composition.
Check the detail that matters
Pause several frames. If the viewer cannot immediately find the subject, simplify the composition.
Keep the next change focused
Name the moment, say what should change and describe what you want to keep. For a title, supply the replacement words. For pacing, identify the shot that needs more or less time. Play the surrounding sequence after the revision to hear and see how the change fits.